babieebianx ( F C )
at 2008-03-02
Loving the flow of the poem 5/5
FallenFromGraceX ( F C )
at 2008-03-17
Really likes how you did two different point of views!
Nice poem :]
Samuel Hernandez aka BabySam ( F C D )
at 2008-09-04
I agree with FallenFromGraceX, doing both the girl and the boy's point of view was great. However, I thought the flow was a little off and there were some misspelled words...other than that...you did a very nice job!
Azzza ( F P C D )
at 2008-09-29
Interesting style u created here...i got tot of doin something like this too but alwayz lost for words...maybe this poems will be my inspiration for my next poem
Grant Gilbert ( F P C D )
at 2008-10-08
A very clever poem i must say, unique in that you show two perspectives , nice.
Well written I like the contasting yet similar meanings of the two stanzas , very interesting
Grant
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