Healing Spirit tpfka Broker ( F P C D )
at 2008-03-03
Very, very nice Alfred!
You have the Midas touch, hehe..
Love,
5/5 Ingrid
debbylyn ( F P C D )
at 2008-03-03
Beautifully sensuous without being too explicit....the implications of passion and love make it a smooth and uplifting read!
"Making dawn
To be my witness
that
my love is a verb
And strong as death "
^ Love these ending lines....Well done illu!!!!
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2008-03-03
A beautiful passion packed poem of love. The imagery is awesome. Very sensuous leaving somethings to the imagination. A love poem written with class.
~Bravo~
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy
sheila
at 2008-03-04
Nice poem, i love it!!!!!!!
Kevin Boundy ( F P C D )
at 2008-03-04
Great work love the emotion and the flow keep it up
Michael D Nalley ( F P C D )
at 2008-04-05
Perhaps in the future I may do justice to your poetry until then please pardon my humility
Kelsie ( P C D )
at 2008-04-08
Wow. im like speechless. this is one of the best pieces i have read in a long time, if not ever. you are very talented and this piece is amazing.
5/5 great job.
Anna Stephens ( F P C D )
at 2008-05-03
Seldom (on this site anyway) do we have the opportunity to read erotic poetry of this quality and beauty--where the richness of the words themselves creates the heat. Hellon is correct--"Hot, Hot, Hot--but very classy"!!!!!
Anna
Danny ( F P C D )
at 2008-05-04
I love the way your poems connect. This "Beautiful Queen" must feel like some goddess. In almost all your poems, her influence is seen within them. The hope she brings to you isn't normal. The fact that you are so grateful for what you have makes you incredible. It is a rare gift.
Love the style of your writings. I'm glad there are some people who still fight to keep chivalry alive. It is gorgeous!
Linda Kennedy
at 2008-05-27
I like very much..you describe passion in set in a mirage of colorless description. Could you do me a favor, if you have not already, and read my poem Sexualize..this is a work of such a passion yet, descriped a little more in a subtel way.
Like your work,
Linda.
Ray Smallshaw ( F P C D )
at 2008-07-28
In the most shameless
tangled twirl of
unconfined seduction
let us articulate
in seamless motions
I must admit I was in hesterics when I read your poem, I have never approached love making with thoughts or actions like that they reminded me of a break dancer and as for all the sweating I suggest you get a good air condition unit, sorry although as always your poems are beatifully contrived gramatically the poem was well over my head if you were trying to convey the act of love-making. This is not a beautiful poem it is to verbose for me. So if this is a serius poem I would give you a 3 but if you want it to be humourous I would give it a 5.
soso ( F C D )
at 2008-09-22
Once more I am reading another poem of yours and dare to comment with shaky hands..I read so many poems every day but as your delicate style I haven't witness, your dealing with the words in a very beautiful spiritualistic way and though this poem is about a very sensitive subject , you wrote it by a very classic romantic sense devoid of unpleasant shameful words...
I am so glad I started commenting your poems.
Lovely read.
Kam
at 2008-11-04
Ii GiiV3 U UR PROPS!
U R A TRU3 P03T...
Muslim Girl Rowena ( F C )
at 2008-12-01
Wow this is a great poem, full of meaning!
SashaMirage ( F P C D )
at 2008-12-04
Everything about this was romantic and exotic. It was very good, you should really should publish the poems you write! 5/5
Aureus Argentum ( F C D )
at 2009-03-15
That was beautiful... I am speechless, that was just amazing. You are a poet of true class! :) And, I like the title! :)
Great job!
Bri~
Pius
at 2009-05-08
Good stuff!!! you tell a story without making it seem vulgar.nicely done.
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