Comments - Only A Feeling

SARA ( F P C ) at 2008-03-09

That is such a sweet poem ... I love it.. 5/5

Diana at 2008-03-09

Oh my gosh I'm speechless lol. This one really hit me hard, made me think of the past and how lonely I truly am. Where does all of this come from, and how are you still single? Another beautiful poem from a beautiful heart! 5/5

Jaymee at 2008-03-09

OMG! Absolutely beautiful hun! I love this poem! It's perfect! 5/5

Monica AKA Mika ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-10

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It made me feel so at ease with everything because your words and everything were just so smooth and they just blended so well together. I have never seen a guy write such great poetry. Your a very deep person and i hope to read more from you soon.

Polaroid ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-11

I loved that, how it was so sweet and loving at the beginning and then near the end, in the last stanza it showed loves flaws: how hard it is to say goodbye. My favorite part was the last though:

The tear down your cheek when we say our goodbyes
From the lump in my throat and the sting in my eyes
When days feel like seconds...and a second a day
So it's only a feeling...but it's like that...love's way

It made me so sad, it was just so desciptive and the rhyme sceme was absolutley perfect, great job. it made me think of the fact that I'm going to have to say goodbye to "him" soon. Thanks for that wonderful read, it was really beatiful, keep on writing, hoping to read more.
Polaroid

Erika ( F ) at 2008-03-11

Now THIS is the Dennis I love! Such beautiful visions run through my mind when I read your romantic poems hun, and this one is breathtaking!
5/5
Love Erika

heartaches808 at 2008-03-11

This poem is super awesome :]

Jackie at 2008-03-11

One thing's for sure, you are definitely a romantic. Your poems of love always leave me smiling. Thanks for another beautiful job! 5/5

Leon ( C ) at 2008-03-12

Wow, great poem.
really good.
i love every single line.
makes me think how lucky i am...

Dark Secrets ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-13

Great poem!! 5/5

Dark Secrets ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-13

Great poem!! 5/5

Rachel ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-21

Your flow was right on in this one. Very sweet and though simply worded, you have avoided really forcing the rhymes. You did a great job on this one! I hope your honey likes it!