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Amber ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-14

Awwww that was so cute and sweet and anyother word liek that that i can't think of at this moment lol
Truly amazing

xXtheXperfectXsoulXx ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-17

I love this baby!! is this poem about me? :P
so much emotion! love it!

XxXDesireeXxX ( F C ) at 2008-03-18

Dang.
You must really love him,
Cause he can force a smile across your face just by laughing.
Haha
good poem
5/5

LiisaMariie143 ( P C ) at 2008-04-10

Aww. you must really like this guy alot!! this is how i feel about my boyfriend! great jobb 5/5

C P Sharma ( C ) at 2008-04-18

You have great poetic sensibility. I can see a budding poet in you. Life has promises for you. Keep it up. I dedicate the following lines to you after reading your life:
Life is love,
Make the whole world your dove;
Take a vow,
To guard this treasure trove.

It don't desecrate,
You can make it great,
With love for all, a new world create,
Where everyday till eternity you can date.

XxAshleyxX ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-24

This is SO awesome!
love can be anywhere... you just gotta wait!
Great Job Hun!
:)
Smile!!!

<3
XxAshleyxX

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