noha ( F P C D )
at 2008-03-17
Waw , great work and i know how you feel when you try hard and he cant see or maybe he see what he only want to see on the other way you try hard to be what he love but i see he dont deserve someone like you,keep write
Xavier ( F C )
at 2008-07-04
Wow. very well written poem. I love all the questions that were asked and the emotions the poem gave off. definitely 5/5.
waiting 4 some1 ( F P C D )
at 2008-07-05
WOW
great poem
excellent poem
the feelings there were so awesome and true
i can feel what you felt when you wrote that poem
i hope you find the right one now
Im Not Emo ( F P C )
at 2008-07-05
I really really really really really really really liked this a lot!!!! AMAZING!!
Shokry ( F C )
at 2008-10-27
Ur really gifted and i love ur way of expressing ur thoughts.. Keep it up 5/5
i want 2 live in a fairytale ( F C )
at 2009-01-31
Tht was really awesoomeeee
u know how 2 express ur feeling really welllll
keep it up :):)
5/5
lili
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