Comments

BLACK CAT 7 ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-28

Nice poem Nonna:) so i will act like you are not hurting me
and learn how to believe in your fake forever
...These words really touched me inside..keep it up 5/5

Sasha ( F P C D ) at 2008-10-27

Mashallah, That was really beautiful. I loved the rhyme and how much emotion you showed in your writing. 5/5 Keep it up

LivingARealDream ( F P C ) at 2008-11-21

Wow, absolutely gorgeous.
wonderful job. please keep writing.
xo. Kelsee .xo