Comments

Bradley Peter ( F P C ) at 2008-04-02

Another good piece from you. I think my favorite stanza was the first one, followed closely by the second. The last three stanzas I didn't like that much. I felt they were much weaker and didn't flow as well, but the first two stanzas were the total opposite. Overall, and an okay piece.

Brad

AngelitaFanne at 2008-05-01

Wauw nice flow of words, like it! Good work! ;)

hannah at 2008-05-08

Tis all gurd :):):):)

alexis at 2008-05-12

Gooooddd!!