Sara ( F P C D )
at 2008-04-13
Aww that poem is so cute :)!... this reminds me a lot about my boyfriend and i....like if someone asks me why i love him, i can talk to them for 15 years, and then they'll be like are you done yet? and i still wouldn't have even made a dent hahah, like he's all i can talk about and think about, and it's a great feeling when you know that you have your forever and a guy who knows how to treat you and love you right
the only thing i'd check over is that there's some spelling mistakes so check that over, but besides that it was a short and sweet poem :) great job 5/5 from me, and thank you for the comment
Goth marionette ( F P C D )
at 2008-07-23
It was a short poem but it was good...I liked the way u wrote it..
Good job,keep it up..
megann anne ( P C )
at 2008-08-08
This is a very simple well written poem. its a beaufitul way to tell someone you love them good job. keep it up. 5/5
check out my new poems.
megann anne ( P C )
at 2008-08-08
This is a very simple well written poem. its a beaufitul way to tell someone you love them good job. keep it up. 5/5
check out my new poems.
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