Comrade Mo ( F P C D )
at 2008-04-08
Aw that was way cute! And you said you can't write love poems! That was sweet! I was confused for a second, but then I read the last part, it made sense! That really was the cutest thing ever! It's so sweet, so sincere, so simple! I love it! Great job!
Sara Sutton
at 2008-04-08
Awwww i love this poem!!
it's so pretty!
<3
waiting for him ( F C D )
at 2008-04-16
Aww!!..its really reaaly short. but really really sweet!!!...totaly love it!...great job!
Aly
halie and andrew hes everything ( F P C D )
at 2008-04-19
Short and simple
but very sweet
i loved it
:]
5/5
Vodka ( F C )
at 2008-05-02
THAT WAS AMAZING!!!! a mix of genre detail and a little bit of romance and love... BRILLIANT! (ps, this is Brandy)
Shinobi ( F P C D )
at 2008-05-15
You tried to show the rush in every day life, but in this rush you still find yourself thinking of your loved one. I liked the idea and the fact that this poem was short gave a fast meaning to all actions. There weren't any rhymes, but in such a short poem it would be expected. Nice work 5/5
I miss you ( F P C )
at 2008-05-16
Its kind of simple...Maybe you could have added a little more to it? But good job anyways
XoXotears of stealXoXo
at 2008-05-18
Like what shinobi said ^^you showed the rush of your day but somehow you still had time to think about what is important to you i like it its short and sweet good job 5/5
*annak*
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