Comments - Not Good Enough...

Secret lover ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-17

Really good=)

waiting for him ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-18

Aww!!!....so sad!!!!!..i love it!..u did an awsum job on this!!..wow!..good job!
Aly
5/5

Julia ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-18

Its sad but i love it <33

StuckInWaiting ( F C ) at 2008-04-19

Aww. i can relate. beautiful flow and choice of words. 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

maEve may ( F P C ) at 2008-04-19

..nice work..5/5:)

C P Sharma ( C ) at 2008-04-19

Your love resembles John Keats' love for Fanny. I am reminded of his lines:

Pillow'd upon my fair love's ripening breast,
To feel for ever its soft fall and swell,
Awake for ever in a sweet unrest,
Still, still to hear her tender-taken breath,
And so live ever or else swoon to death.

maya at 2008-04-19

Very nice...i liked it a lot! :)

neo ( F P C ) at 2008-04-19

Thank you for writing this poem. now I know that it's not just a woman that hurts, but men do too. 5/5

Shannon Bridget ( P C D ) at 2008-04-22

Wonderful job! I love it. Thanks for sharing!

katrina at 2008-04-22

Awwwwww how sad :(

mwah

unspokken ( C ) at 2008-04-22

This poem was awesome, and lately this is what I am thinking too. It's the exact same thing, but I cant get these things wrote down on paper. haha. Still loved it. I read some of your other poems too, and I thought that they were good, your an awesome writer.

XxBabyGirlxXisWAITINGx4xHIMXx ( F P D ) at 2008-04-23

Awwwwwww sad..... thats like so touching... but mayb it wasnt you... it was her....
good poem... keep it up mwa xo

baby

XxBabyGirlxXisWAITINGx4xHIMXx ( F P D ) at 2008-04-23

Awwwwwww sad..... thats like so touching... but mayb it wasnt you... it was her....
good poem... keep it up mwa xo

baby

Cesar at 2008-04-23

Hey man many of us feel the exact same way ur poem describes... 5 star poem dude.

kro at 2008-04-23

Aw its beautiful!
it really touched my â¥!

Daniela at 2008-04-23

AWWW!
i LOVE IT! â¥
Awsome!
â¥
:D

Daniela at 2008-04-23

:D

kro at 2008-04-23

XD

kro at 2008-04-23

XD

Daniela at 2008-04-23

XD


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