sexyCheckers ( F P C )
at 2008-05-07
Hate to say this...
But its not as strong as your others...
To me anyway...
<3
Forever Broken ( F P C D )
at 2008-05-07
Wow i really liked this. It had a ot of emotions and the flow was great. This must have hurt to write. =/
So I guess we'll walk away,
Leave eachother behind,
We both know there's so much to say,
But maybe it's better left unsaid this time.
^^^This is my favorite stanza. I really enjoyed it. I know exactly how u feel. this has happened to me before. I'm sorry u had to go thru it. once again beautiful job. 5/5
~Forever broken~
Skye ( F P C D )
at 2008-09-15
I liked it. I particularly like the last stanza. Although, I have to say, I agree with sexyCheckers. It isn't as strong as some of your other work, but it's good all the same.
FallenFromGraceX ( F C )
at 2008-10-01
EXACTLY how I'm feeling. Great poem love your work!
ForeverASickKid ( F C )
at 2008-11-17
Im speechless this poem was amazing
dreamofolwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-04-10
I really liked your poem.The first two lines had me captivated .."you had me at hello, but you had to say goodbye" great opening! Looking 4ward to reading more of yours. LOL
XxT0tAllY0v3ry0uxX ( F C D )
at 2009-06-05
Beautiful good job
Nae Nae Social Scene ( P )
at 2009-09-21
This is amazing! the emotion here is killer, I know exactly how it all feels.
5/5
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