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Oreagumo Angel ( F P C ) at 2008-05-06

Love it
5/5

Oreagumo Angel ( F P C ) at 2008-05-07

You need to write more

msluckyone ( C ) at 2008-05-07

Wow that's hot lol burn baby burn lol

Jim McMillen the man within ( F P C ) at 2008-05-08

Wow I wanted to stand next to you just to keep warm

Drivin Me Insane ( F C D ) at 2008-05-09

Awesome! 5/5

Erin at 2008-05-09

Wow that was amazing great work !
5/5 =]

Lakota at 2008-05-09

Sensational!! Very passionate!

rjane ( C D ) at 2008-05-10

Powerful..but maybe it would be better if its longer..you can do bettrer!

Pink Princess ( F P C D ) at 2008-05-11

Awwww so sweeet xxx

EternalGuilt ( F P C D ) at 2008-06-02

N_n i found that just sooo cute

billy rob ( F P C D ) at 2008-06-07

"Your kisses bring me alive
In flames
Until there is no flesh
No bone
Only the searing of my soul"

I thought the entire write to be excellent, but the above verse was superb. You nailed the feelings of desire we get when we are with the one we love. Excellent piece. Well done, indeed. Billy Rob

Ravi at 2008-09-10

Superb wordings. Love this poem.

Somewhere Between Life and Death ( F P C D ) at 2008-10-09

Great poem
Very powerful
Moving
Loved it
5/5

WETNESS ( F C ) at 2009-01-09

I LOVE LOVE THIS POEM

Tom Swart ( F P C ) at 2009-03-20

Oh to be young and in love like this again. very nice images, good words well chosen and placed with care. I could feel their firey breath !!! keep up the good works

damont ( F P C ) at 2009-07-07

Wonderful poem beautiful

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