Sarah ( F C D )
I enjoyed this wonderful piece you penned here, perfectly written. I hope one day you define your destiny. Awesome write!
Kittens Poems ( P C )
Very sweet poem
lustiousSeduction xo ( F P C )
Omg! thats such a beautiful poem! i love it, love every word! you hav amazing talent hun. i can relate 2 this one! keep up the amazing work 5/5
Love Love xo
Perfect Imperfection ( F P C D )
Kayla, dear, this poem is very sweet...Jake's going to florida soon..won't really see him until July....so it's relatable. but know, if things change, things change. you can't stop them, so embrace them and hope that htey change for the better. *hugs*
Hieu V Ngueyn ( F P C D )
AW... this is a very true poem, you're not alone, i'm currently feeling the same thing!
pleae keep up the good work!
NEIL MUNRO ( C )
Excellent poem, shows your true feelings perfectly, i know whats it's like to be away from the one you care about believe me. Keep writting 5/5
Your poem is beautiful. And I can relate a lot. Keep up the good work!
Very Beautiful Poem
Beautiful a lot of thought
Nice poem i love it its deep
Taylor xP ( F )
That was so super good!! Wow you've got skillz...
What a nice poem !! i really liked it :D
keep it up 5 out of 5
xxHeart Broken Loserxx ( F P C D )
Awww so ah-dorable i deff. understand how you feel for me school ends in 17 days and i cant live wihtout this boy
I can relate to what you mean. my school year is ending soon and now that i think about it i wont get to see my crush either.
i love this poem...keep it up!
Becca ( F P C D )
I loved this poem. It was powerful, and I can completely relate but in a differnt way. I'm stuck in love with an ex. But this was beautifully written and you are an amazing writer! 5/5
Awwwwww this is beautiful..
this poems just says EXACTLY how i feel right now..amazzzzing job puttin this feeling into words ^_^
its simply amazzzing <3
keep up the good work! 10/5 lol xD..haha 5/5
You Should So Tell Him How You Feel
Its A Real Nice Poem =]*
♥shyann♥ ( F P C )
i love the way you worded this
"I know tomorrow will hurt,
But the tears will fade away.
Life is too short for regrets,
There will be a brighter day."
and this part was flawless:
"Looking back on everything,
I still remember his smile.
I wish things didn't end so soon,
And turn back time for awhile"
Overall its a wonderful poem you did a great job!! 5/5
Verry nice poem.
Omg. i can TOTALLY relate to this! i know exactly how you feel, what your feeling in your heart when you wrote this. :'( im seriously almost in tears. this is beautiful, amazing job. 5/5!