Lisa ( F C )
at 2008-06-09
But that didn't work for you
I guess I didn't fit in your life.
Maybe I'll fit perfectly in your arms,
just no longer than one night
Another good one and this is my favorite stanza...5/5
sexyCheckers ( F P C )
at 2008-06-17
Awww, anuva gorgeous poem! <3
"God knows there's so much
That if I got you to listen, I'd explain."
That part especiallyy ----- The first stanza sorta doesnt have much of a flow, but the rest is gold.
5/5
xxxxx
Healing Spirit ( F P C D )
at 2008-08-28
To show your feeling to someone can be a very scary thing to do, because you can never be 100% sure about how someone is going to react...But if you don't, you will miss out on love for sure, so I think you did do the right thing by telling how you felt:)
I hope all turns out well for you.
Good poem:))
Take care,
5/5 Ingrid
Dian da FrIeNdLy SnAkE ( F P C D )
at 2008-09-11
THAT PERSON DONT DESERVE YOU!! if i am a man i will so happy that some one like u could loved me as me... as what other says "if you dont deserve at my worst you dont deserve me in my best" goodluck 5/5
Dian da FrIeNdLy SnAkE ( F P C D )
at 2008-09-11
THAT PERSON DONT DESERVE YOU!! if i am a man i will so happy that some one like u could loved me as me... as what other says "if you dont deserve at my worst you dont deserve me in my best" goodluck 5/5
Cindy Mountain ( P C )
at 2009-06-29
Yoy are a great writer, surprised I haven't caught this great work before...Keep it up
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