Singthesorrow
at 2008-08-21
Very real.
Planned Parenthood Lies ( F P C D )
at 2010-02-09
This was such a happy love poem and did not strike me as cliche. It was real and every word alive inside, I think you pinned this perfectly. The rhyming did not seem forced and everything flowed like a carefree melody.
Beautiful work dear, keep it up.
Take care!
~MaryAnne
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