Comments

Blond Genius ( F P C D ) at 2008-06-20

Thats really sweet.
great pictures and imagery.
nice wording too.
i love it a lot.
im going to read more of yours later.

Lexie

Madara at 2008-06-20

So, so , so truly and nice. Really like it! ::)*

Leap Of Faith aka Temps ( F P C D ) at 2008-06-21

"And as you kissed my forehead,
You whispered, "I love you so."
-I think this line would sound okay without And.. idk.. it can be there, but i don't think it's necessairly needed.

"And I came to realize that
Wild horses couldn't drag me away... "
-excellent. i finally got the whole part about the title being "Wild Horses" yay. :) This poem was extremely amazing. Very beautiful and sweet. 5/5

Goran Rahim ( F P C D ) at 2008-06-22

Aww this is such a great poem
you have done a great job... keep it up

Little Miss Alice Lost ( F P C D ) at 2008-07-08

I like this one... it's sweet and makes me smile... really good one dear. 5/5

~Rave

A Phine To Sour skittles ( F P C D ) at 2008-07-10

And as you kissed my forehead,
You whispered, "I love you so."

Putting this here by the end is something really sweet you made this poem a very great write but Also a great read for me thank you =]
5/5

xXxFireflyxXx ( F P C D ) at 2008-07-11

Aww this poem is so cute. The imagery you used was fabulous.

"You held my hand in yours so soft
Your voice sounding so bright
As I crawled in bed beside you
And whispered goodnight."

^^^ This is my favorite stanza!!