Comments

BluJay ( F P C D ) at 2008-07-12

Stevie, not one of your best. The flow was a little choppy for me, maybe it was the way i read it. I dont know, i don't feel much of it.

But I like the topic :)

Ashleigh Skye ( F P C D ) at 2008-08-06

I really liked this one and I don't think that the flow was choppy at all. Its true how somtimes love is a gamble, and sometimes it pays off while other times it doesn't, this poem made me realise that whats meant to happen will happen and if its not meant to be you just have to make sure that you can look yourself in the mirror at the end of it all. Nice work.

DGAF lyf is hard with out u ( F P C D ) at 2008-10-09

Great poem. i really liked it. keep up the good work. ^_^

Jesse Lea ( F P C D ) at 2008-12-10

I really liked this poem. i agree, its not your best and it was a little choppy, so i reread it and it sounded better. this poem really does make you think about life and love and everything that life throws at you. great job by the way. 5/5

trippetta ( P C D ) at 2009-01-22

Hmm maybe if you hadn't have left it up in the air at the end like hands down I fold walking away a winner or something to that effect?

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