neon penguin aka Living Dead ( F P C D )
at 2008-07-11
Awwww! so sweet! 5/5
**harlea
P o e t i c Junkie ( F P C D )
at 2008-07-11
Every time I have a problem,you listen and make it go away.
Never leaving my side,helping me through each and every day.
Always treating me so kindly,letting me know you're always there.
No matter where I may be,you are always showing that you care.
^^Sammy, what a way to start the poem!! Blows the readers mind right out of the water!
Please know that I always have and will have faith in you.
I know you aren't like the rest,you've shown feelings so true.
You are unique in every possible way,making my pains leave.
I hope you know how much I love you,honestly you mean so much to me.
^^I can feel the emotions.
Knowing I have been hurt,you are always there by my side.
You make my life so valuable,you are the greatest gift of life.
My world was full of hurt and pain,and then you came along.
Even though you've been through so much,you always are strong.
^^People, have been saying exactly that to me lately. Wow, and then you put it into a poem. Weird. I mean, not it a bad way. An awesome way, because I can realte.
Everyone has their little imperfections,yours are sweet as can be.
You're someone I will give my heart to, you're strong when you're weak.
Each and every day I talk to you, my heart starts skipping beats.
You are definitely what my world revolves around,you are so unique.
^^Nice ending. Using the word unique too, because you're poems re unique.
-rys
Amber ( F P C D )
at 2008-07-11
Very well written.
It obv shows taht you care for this person which makes it good
Leap Of Faith aka Temps ( F P C D )
at 2008-07-11
Wow. This is so kind, cute, amazing, very well written, perfect, wow. It's a gorgeous poem. This poem is a very nice dedication! It is expressed VERY WELL. I can now see why it was nominated for the weekly poems. I'm going to nominate it as well, it is very good. Rhyme, is fabulousssss. Wow, 5/5
sammisam
at 2008-07-14
I love your peom it shows how much the person means to u your a great peom writer
Alexandria
at 2008-07-15
Awww... that's how I feel about my bf...
Chelsie ( F D )
at 2008-07-15
This poem is just the one i have been looking for. me and my boyfriend are going through a rough patch and ive been looking for a poem to tell him how much he means to me!! thanks for that........it is exactly the words i wanted to say but they just wouldnt come out of me!!! thanks again so much
ashlee ann
at 2008-07-16
This poem was really good... keep up the good work
Matthew Madzelan
at 2008-07-17
I enjoyed this one, flowed very well and made believe there are some people worthwhile out there.
oX BlueberryMuffinz Xo ( F P C D )
at 2009-03-07
This is really well written. I would love to say that i could still relate to this...but not anymore. =[
anywaysss. lol. It was an amazing write, it flowed through well and you kept up the rhyme scheme from start to finish. Very enjoyable piece. Keep it up. 5/5
I Bruise Easily ( F P C D )
at 2009-06-27
Kick ass poem, it all ties in nicely together. well done. i love your work.
IBE
X
Randy East ( F C D )
at 2009-12-24
What a wonderful poem, I would give my left leg to someone if they wrote a poem this sweet for me. I have a gift. like I said before, I love poems that rhyme and flow. You have a nack for it.
Ok maybe not my leg. I kinda want to keep that. lol
Randy East ( F C D )
at 2009-12-24
Errr..... u have a gift.
lol not " I "
sry
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