they called her ashley as she tu ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-16
This poem could be really good, but there is a lot of repetaiveness. what you can so is take it out, or use different words to make it sound a little different. if ou work at it, you could become a great writer.
much care,
ashley
ps if u need advise always here if u need me :)
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