Young Poet ( F P C )
at 2008-07-14
Damn girl! this was so... COOL! it took me back when i had my first kiss. loved the way you express yourself with love. keep up the good work. keep writing too.
[ Praised by : Princess of Unicorns ]
Queen of Hearts ( F P C )
at 2008-08-07
I WISH MY FIRST KISS WAS LIKE THIS.
Hell Hath No Fury On Me RIP Lest ( F P C D )
at 2008-08-30
I liked this one
you really showed the reader what a first kiss would be like
it makes you feel like you are there having your first kiss
great poem 5/5
Composed Catastrophe ( F P C D )
at 2008-11-26
So simple but so gosh darn cute !!! : ) i loved it honestly it was to the point no extra words just what the reader needed and you picked all the right words flow was there and the rhyming was a luxury
5/5 <33
MrsDeanWinchestah ( F C D )
at 2008-11-28
Hah awee , this is so cute . Definately brings back old memories . Good job love , 5/5
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