Melissa ( F C )
at 2008-07-29
Awww this is a really good poem i love two parts
"but when i walked through
the golden gates i felt so much at home
and through all my days on earth
i finally felt not alone"
its makes so much sense and it really makes you feel so much more relaxed i love the way you put that part!
"so if tomorrow starts without me
dont think were far apart
for every time u think of me
I'm right here in Ur heart"
i loved how you put that cause everytime some1 dies you feel so far away from them but when you say it like that its like you can feel them right there and it speaks so much truth!
wonderful poem 5/5!
plz rate or comment back thank you!
Rayne
at 2008-12-03
OMG cuzin that was so hard. You got a gift gurl.
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