Sourav ( F P C D )
at 2008-07-21
Manish... Hello...
Just read you poem. Honestly it's very good. Good constructed lines and very meaningful too. But I just want to say one thing more... You should be more careful with punctuations.
'cant miss a chance to see U' rather write like this you should write it this way... 'can't miss a chance to see you'
This will make your poem much more significant t the readers. Just a suggestion. I hope you wouldn't mind. Well written poem though.
Karan ( F P C D )
at 2008-07-27
WoW... Nice poem with an amazing flow... keep up the great work...5/5...:-) Honest Luck...
waiting for the unknown
at 2008-11-04
This is beautiful. the flow is very elegant and graceful. it's intricate but provides enough simplicity to easily guide the readers feelings. great poems :)
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