Angel of Love ( F P C D )
at 2008-08-05
Awww....Alfred!
I am stunned! What a beautiful love poem:)
You had me smiling from ear to ear with this one...so very sweet:)))
Love always,
Ingrid
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2008-08-13
Alfred
This poem is full of the beauty of love. The imagery and word choices are fantastic.
oh my sweet Damsel,
can you feel this pounding,
as the vernal blossom of our souls
open their verdant petals,
revealing the unseen hues of inner beauty?
oh, can you hear the trembling,
unspoken echoes of
~I love you~
Reading these words makes one want to get lost in this piece and just relish the feelings of pure sweet love.
just let our sacred existence
dissolve into a Tranquil Silence
and our souls too
will serenade
the silent whispers of
this true passion...
What a wonderful piece of beauty you have penned. This could melt even a cold heart.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy
Deana ( F P C D )
at 2008-08-14
Alfred ,like all of your writing this is so romantic ,I think sometimes it is a mark of true love when we can be comfortably silent in each others company.A wonderful poem!
Rachel ( F P C D )
at 2008-09-05
Oh, you do have a way with words.....Beautifully penned with a stunning word choice!
soso ( F C D )
at 2008-09-16
I can't remember how many times I came here and read this poem and dare not to comment, and with every time new feelings are revealed within me.In fact no words can describe how masterly this piece of art was written.
Best wishes.
Kelsie ( P C D )
at 2008-12-30
Wow. this poem is simply beautiful. I read it out loud and it was amazing. You are very talented. 5/5 extremely well done.
Gem ( F P C D )
at 2009-01-14
"to wrap our heartbeats
into a hushed mist of ethereal stillness."
I loved that couplet the most. It;s sweet and leaves a nice feeling behind, lol.
You always pen such lovely poetry!
5/5
Gem
kelleyana ( F P C D )
at 2009-01-21
"oh my sweet Damsel,
can you feel this pounding,
as the vernal blossom of our souls
open their verdant petals,
revealing the unseen hues of inner beauty?
oh, can you hear the trembling,
unspoken echoes of." What a beautiful love poem. i enjoy this breathtaking couplet. One that touches the heart and very sensational. Very well done. I enjoy my read filled with great feelings. 5/5, kel.
Tom Swart ( F P C )
at 2009-07-16
You are a word master and a great builder of poems. Like granite walls that last forever I think that many of your poems will withstand the winds of time and remain relevant no matter how much time passes. The style you have chosen for your poems works well and you have a gift of picking the right words.
AngelDust ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-28
No need for fancy words nor
breakable promises,
voiced by bewildered lips.
just let our sacred existence
dissolve into a Tranquil Silence
and our souls too
^^Fav part of this piece. It's beautiful. So paceful and well written. The words you used were very well put together and displayed. Wonderful.
xDanikax
xxoxoxx
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