yReNeRy ( F P C D )
at 2008-08-07
Amanda!!! How are you?
'twas quite a long time..
Aww I liked this poem. It reminded me of Sundays afternoons at my Granny's old town where people gathered around and shared afternoon meals at the town plaza.
I can almost picture the scene vividly..the sun setting down and the music being played by the seniors. Nostalgia (^_^)..
I almost felt younger when I read the stanzas. -thinks back to the old days-
You really are a good poet. Keep the good work. (^_^)
Thanks for commenting on my poem.
5/5
best regards always,
yReNe
colm ( F P C D )
at 2008-08-08
I like this poem, it describes universal issues using particular examples. You create such peaceful images of contentment and happiness it made me happy just reading it.
Nice write
Colm
Ray Smallshaw ( F P C D )
at 2008-08-08
Amanda this is the first of you poems I have written and as a moderator I will from now on hold you with respect as a poet as will if you read any of my poetry take in any comments seriously. A wonderfully simple poem but filled with so much and immaculately written as soon as I have written this and voted a 5/5 I can't wait to read more, I do love great poetry of all kinds Ray S
Crossover
at 2008-08-26
Good poem. please check mine out and give mi a comment and or rate them. thanx
Paige ( F C D )
at 2008-09-23
Beautiful! love it! amazing flow, you really paint a picture with words :)
kelleyana ( F P C D )
at 2008-11-13
I really like this poem. It reminds me of when i were younger. This touches me so much, it brings back happy times. iT MERITS 5/5,kel.
ReBecca ( F P C D )
at 2008-11-19
This was touching Amanda. Great imagery, I could almost feel the soft breeze sighing through my hair.
xXxXhes the everything i cudve a ( F P C )
at 2009-07-22
I can visualize all the examples youve used in your poem to make it a poem. i like that also. not many people could use real life examples to put into a poem like you did. thats cool. 5/5.
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