Comments

HEBA ( F C D ) at 2008-08-07

OMG,what a wondeful poem.It was really lovely and touching.I can see how much devoted and faithful you are and I am sure he knows your appreciaton and your deep love.
5\5;)...

soso ( F C D ) at 2008-08-07

Lovely indeed.
it was short but you managed to convey warmth and sweet sensations,,also it was easily felt by the reader.
soso

Lustless Envy ( F ) at 2008-08-07

Short and sweet.
=]

MikaMad15 ( P ) at 2008-08-08

Beautiful!

hmfreak at 2008-08-08

Hey nice poem this does fit a 5.0 or higher

Shapeless ( F P C ) at 2008-08-08

An excellent poem ... loved it from the first line to the last. Short and sweet.

Mino Harintiana ( F P ) at 2008-08-09

5/5.
keep on the good work !

jamie25 ( C ) at 2008-08-10

Nice work ! I enjoyed it

NoUr ( F C D ) at 2008-08-17

Cute & sweet..lucky he is ;)..keep it up!!

Amena Azeza Malik ( F C ) at 2008-08-22

This is a really cute and simple poem.. like it.. =) Keep writing

Karan ( F P C ) at 2008-08-24

Sweetly written sweet lil poem, keep it up....

NeverSayForever at 2008-09-02

:D 5/5

Sourav ( F P C D ) at 2008-09-04

Sweet and very rhythmic. Nice to read! Good one!

Emotionz at 2008-09-19

Your poems just keep getting better.. 5/5

The Tears Of Time ( F P C ) at 2008-09-19

That was a wonderful write! very hearfelt and true. i loved it alot. the form was good and the flow was perfect, would be even better if it was longer though. but it's beautiful, job well done. 5/5.

-AAshlei.

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