Frederick Mayer ( C )
at 2008-08-23
This is an excellent poem that is right to the point with a deftly executed twist. The work has a flow that engulfs the receiver until the very end, then ends right on ending-point...not an easy thing to pull off, even for the best of writers/poets!
XxI mIsS h3RXxPb n JxX ( F C D )
at 2008-08-23
Amazing it was a great poem...great job favorite part will have to be....
"Watching crimson merge,
With crystal-clear rain.
Wondering if all this is worth,
Falling in love again."
i like the way the poems was put in the concept 5/5
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