billy rob ( F P C D )
at 2008-09-10
"Who sings me a lullaby.
When i cry myself to sleep?
When i fall down the mountain.
You smoothened the mountain's steep."
I loved this poem, my friend. Alittle different write for you. Be careful, you'll show that big heart you carry around. I thought the way you repeated the stanzas was excellent. My favorite stanza...why the above, of course. Well done. Very well done, indeed. Billy Rob
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