Hopeless Romantic ( F D )
at 2008-09-12
I'd just like to point out, give you note, that in my poem I wrote "To give you your first kiss." & that the title says "Our First Kiss". Just thought it would good to point out, because my first official kiss was our (both me & my bf's) first.
Daisy Wells ( F P C D )
at 2008-09-12
Aww thats really nice it really shows how much it meant to you very good write keep up the good work x
Hopeless Romantic ( F D )
at 2008-09-12
Ps. I also wrote this in the viewpoint of my bf, adding some of his thoughts & mine together.
HidinVictim ( F P C D )
at 2008-09-15
Awww this is so sweet, and the flow is amazing, i love the rhyming techneque(sp) you used and the story you told was flawless, and so romantic, i got goose bumps reading this great job...5/5
Dave ( F C D )
at 2008-10-28
This made me think of a kiss of my own a very long time ago. You captured the nervous excitment and anticipation of a first kiss beautifully! Good work! Dave.
Poetically Speaking ( F P C D )
at 2008-12-18
I can relate. It was always tough telling my loved ones goodbye when I was in the Army. Great poem hun, thanks for sharing your feelings! =)
5/5
Wonderwoman ( C )
at 2009-01-19
Wow i really feel the emotion good job xox
NEIL MUNRO ( C )
at 2009-07-12
What a beautifully written poem, i could just picture you there with your guy. 10-10
Emma Wallis ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-05
Such a wonderful poem about a wonderful feeling shared between first loves. 5/5. Em xx
On Cupids Bad Side ( F C )
at 2009-11-04
Aww. I remember my first kiss :) great poem i really enjoyed it
Jeff Weiner ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-01
What a sweet memory, your first kiss is always one to remember
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