HEBA ( F C D )
at 2008-09-21
OH WOW.What a nice piece.It was really wonderful and amazing,I truly loved it.But don't worry sis may allah let you go back to him and stay together for ever.
Nice poem and really lovely.5\5...
Amena ( F C )
at 2008-09-23
I love this poem. Good advices about how to keep a relationship going.
I especially loved the lines:
"Never give up on your love,
And hold on to what you are feeling in your heart.
For a love that is sincere, and strong,
Will be held together, no matter how far you are apart."
And “Do not let the seeds of jealousy,
Begin growing deep inside your heart.
Because if you let this happen without good cause,
Your relationship will surely be doomed to fall apart.â€
5/5, beautifully written. The whole poem was beautifully written.. Keep it up..
xx
Sweet lig ( F P C D )
at 2008-09-25
Im so touch w/ this piece! im actually affected about the message coz i had also love someone so far away from me. so this poem is really great, for me it really has a great dedication. though its kinda long but very meaningful and enjoyable. most of all i've learned alots w/this great piece!!! i love it keep it up 5/5
soso ( F C D )
at 2008-09-26
Hello my sister,
I can see how much wisdom you applied in this piece.
So many girls are related to this well written poem in which your emotions are so touchable.
Good luck hun.
BleednLOVE ( F C )
at 2008-09-26
Amazing work,, you encourage loyalty, honesty, peace, respect etc; all through love :)
sarah
at 2008-09-26
I really really loved it.. its a very encourging poem..
what i loved the most is the way u showed
how it might be really hard to have that kind of relationship
but on the other hand, the love between
two people should be stronger than the distance.. very good job ^^
LAYD33 D3SiR3 ( C )
at 2008-09-26
Wow im jealous ..great poem.......love the emotions ..if was heartwarming...
Doodi
at 2008-09-26
Omg
can this poem make me cry any much more
looooooooooooved it
added to ma favs
keep it up please
NeverSayForever
at 2008-10-22
I love some one far away but i know he no longer loves me as much. Anyway amazing poem. I know how you feel. It is hard. 5/5.x
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