alexandria
at 2004-08-18
all of your poems are nice
prettyboy07 ( F P C D )
at 2006-03-31
Short but sweet :]
Bloomed Rose ( F C D )
at 2006-06-21
Short and sweet lit pretty boy said! I really like it, great job, perfect score!
kelS;
at 2006-06-21
Wow. this one actually is soo good. i can`t really explain why.. but probally because the flow is so good. wow. i couldn`t think of anyways to improve it! 5/5
homicidal_beauty ( F )
at 2006-07-04
I liked it it just tells me guyz do suck! well some do well thanks for the comment i apericate the comment this was a pleasure to read!!:)
Danielle ( C D )
at 2006-07-07
Very very good! one of the best i read today! keep it up!
i loved the emotion with such simple phrases!
Natalee
at 2006-07-08
Its really good and really true :D great job
Cayce Lee ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-09
Good job short and sweet. I enjoy short poems. The flow and rhyme were good. You did a wonderful job! Keep it up!
Cayce
Arcane Blondie ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-10
Very good poem! Short and to the point. I love poems that have short lines. It is a unique format. The flow is on target and the rhyme in it doesnt sound forced at all----Great write! Definately a 5/5
ShadowDancer (Ruby) ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-13
Wonderful. the shortness of the lines made this poem really effective. i lvoed it. a brillient work
Ruby
goddess-glamourpuss ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-20
Brilliannt. Short sweet and to the point.
>black&&blue ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-21
The lines are so short, but the words are so powerful. Great job. I love reading love poems. This is an excellent piece. Keep it up.
>black&&blue
¦●→sammycakes←●¦ ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-24
Good job, yet again. I thought it really did send out a message, even though it was sorta short. Very good job. 5/5 xoxo
Samantha
Biscuit ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-24
Good fast pace created by the short words, a nice effect, like the rhyming as well.
-biscuit-
Perfectly Pale Perfection ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-25
I like the set up of this poem.
The feeling and everything I got when I read it was amazing.
Great Write.
xDarkSuicidex ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-27
I love this.. I simply love this. Nothing else to say. It was wonderful and something I wish I would have written.
xDarkSuicidex 5.5
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