Deana ( F P C D )
at 2008-09-24
This leaves the reader with sadness. You always write from the heart and this is no exception, I guess that is what poetry is meant to do...convey a message. Beautiful and yet sad imagery.
jennifer ( F P C D )
at 2008-10-24
I loved it, it's been a while since I've commented your work, you always capture me and I am drawn in by your words, great job:)