RebeccaSarah ( F C D )
at 2008-09-23
What a cute poem!
Your feelings really show through this,
Great job :)
abstrusity ( F C D )
at 2008-09-26
Aw, very cute. :]
HvNxInsanity Embracedx ( F C D )
at 2008-09-27
You truly explained what love is in a heavenly beautiful way!
5/5
Karan Gods Warrior ( F P C D )
at 2008-11-15
This poem is really great... The feelings and the emotions are so tender and true... I know how it feels when someone who really loves you is by your side and makes you laugh through out the day... It like coming home...:) Nice poem... Keep up the great work...:) Honest Luck...
Grant Gilbert AKA Slash ( F P C D )
at 2008-11-15
A very cute love poem it seemed to read quite sweet and innocent,i'm sure your friend must have really liked it
Grant
Dream Angel ( F P C D )
at 2009-04-21
Very sweet poem:)
I bet the one you made it for had a smile from ear to ear when he recieved it!
Keep writing!
5/5 Ingrid
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