500 reasons to die ( F P C D )
The flow of words , just amazing, this with out a doubt deserve to be added to my favorites
Robie ( F C D )
WOW... the flow was amazing, the rhyming... awsome...
i loved the last stanza
Miniz ( C D )
Omg...i just love this pem...full stop...
Tamon G ( F P )
Your beautiful smile, picture perfect in my mind
You were always my protector & never unkind
When lightening struck and we entered a storm
You would hold me close & you'd keep me warm
the words and the flow fits the overall mood of the poem very well. Keep up the good work
XxXAmandaXxX ( F C D )
Awesome poem i love it soo much
*emmax* ( C )
The imagery is vivid and provokes one's mind to "see" the poem come alive.
A wonderful piece indeed!
My favorite out of all the poems I've read so far!
Dark Savior ( F P C D )
Good poem, it really shows how you were feeling at that moment in time. I thinkt hat it was written very quickly because it's just that good.
When our eyes locked I knew I'd found love
You were my angel sent to me from above
Those two lines have been used so many times, especially the ending; which I'm referring to. Love and Above have been rythmed so many times.
I loved the last Stanza it's really good. I loved that, I read it a few times. Very good lines. I loved it and really appreciated the read.
xXIIXx ( F C D )
Gosh..u rhyme so good.......all ur poems r great...and dis piece is really cool.....sry im bad at commenting...but good work is always appreciated =)
Emma Wallis ( F P C D )
The best ones are always dreamt about. So beautiful yet sad that it's just a dream. Perfect as always though. 5/5, Em