Luanne ( F P C D )
at 2008-10-12
Bonfire of desire
Undying for a thousand years
For love is the eternal chior
Singing to erotic ears
^^^
XD I absolutely love your ending ....
chior .... do you mean choir ?
Your stanzas whisper words that warm the heart and yet give hope to those who have given up on love ... that there is a "bonfire of desire and love to be found" and it starts with just one spark.
Wonderful read my friend!
Luanne
[ Praised by : SnoWryTeR xiaoDan ]
JUSTme dora ( F C )
at 2008-10-17
Aww your poem was beautiful. very heartfelt. fave verse:
"Love ignited from a spark
Blaze deep within the heart
Quelling loneliness of dark
As softly, a kiss they impart "
great job once again!!!!!!!! 5/5
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