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Chaotic Angel ( F P C D ) at 2008-10-27

Nice job...
One grammar error i caught though, i believe it was suppose to be "no tears"... but it was written "mo tears" just so you are aware.
Keep it up.
*Chaotic Angel*

hurtbutnotbroken at 2009-03-24

Thank you for the comment

Just A Nightmare Wrapped Dream ( F P C D ) at 2009-03-27

Very simple but yet so deep. great poem. Shanik

hurtbutnotbroken at 2009-03-27

Shanik thank you for the comment.

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