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PRiNCESS SKiTTLEZ ( F P C ) at 2008-11-20

L0VE iT !!

PRiNCESS SKiTTLEZ ( F P C ) at 2008-11-20

L0VE iT !!

xXBurninxDesireXx ( F P C D ) at 2009-04-12

My Teenage Sweetheart, Baby Boy
Mi Amor. Mi Todo. Aqui Estoy

^awww... for me i love spanish words in poem. it makes it more personal more emotional for me. i love it.

You Left, I cried.. So Hurt Inside
Missing You. Want To Be By Your Side

^aww.. thats how i feel wen i dnt have mi chicko by myside i feel my ohter half is gone wen he leaves. i love this part as well. strong emotions.

Your Kiss. Your Touch. Te Necesito
Your Smile. Your Laugh. Te Quiero

^lovely words you have writen here. needing him n loving him truly says it right here

Days Went By, Nothing Known
Weeks. Then Months. I'm Losing Hope

^flow was nice. i like it

One Year Later. It's So Unreal
Can't Believe I Feel What I Feel

^amazing i love it. trulie sad as wel.

I Smile. I Blush, When I Hear Your Name
I Pray To God You Feel The Same

^the same here. everytime i hear my chicko's nombe i do blush n smile i can so realte to this part. it reminds mi of him. i lubit!!

I'm Here For You In Time Of Need
I'm Here With You When You Succeed

^you are by his side though rain or shine. an amazing friend has well.

Letting You Know That I Trust You
Whatever Is Next.. Is Up To You

^i love ur closing. amazing job you did here. keep it up!!
[copyright][chriswifeyy]
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

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