Comments - Reverie

Luanne ( F P C D ) at 2008-10-28

I really really love this piece Jenn

It flows so sweetly!!

I bear the minutes, count the seconds
Through it all your memory beckons
Soon I'll eliquet race to be with you
Living what my daydream knew
^^^
Love the ending ....
When the work day end we get to fulfill the sweet daydreams.

Beautiful read .... loved the rhyme scheme and the gentle flow of your words. Loved the title !!!
Well done
Luanne

Sourav ( F P C D ) at 2008-10-29

Beautiful lines and well expressed. Very interesting to read. A good one!

Composed Catastrophe ( F P C D ) at 2008-11-10

Unbelievably great job! i really connected to your poem and liked how it was complex in the way you worded it it was refreshing : ) 5/5 ((i voted for you))

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2008-11-10

Congrats for a beautiful Poem....What a treat to see the weekly winners this week :)
RTVW ROCKS!!!!!!!

Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2008-11-10

The excellence is self evident

great work

Sylvia ( F P C D ) at 2008-11-10

This is an excellent write and very good flow. The words roll off your tongue with ease. Wonderful topic and evokes memories of years past.

I think this is my favorite verse, because I can remember those days.

I wish to dream the day away
Lost in thought of yesterday
When tender lips caressed my skin
Drew me down and pulled me in

debbylyn ( F P C D ) at 2008-11-10

Heartfelt congrats on your win...beautiful poem with great sentiment and rhyme and flow awesome!

Ian ( F C ) at 2008-11-13

The best one i have seen yet on this website.
i really enjoyed reading this one and it made all perfect sense and it reminds me of my old memories.
thank you!