Italian Stallion ( F P C D )
at 2009-02-22
Nice and short, but I would've liked to see it a bit longer, kind of feels like the meaning behind this poem wasn't portrayed to the fullest. Overall a nice short write.
Peace, Joe
BrittBaby aka wonderwoman ( C )
at 2009-07-30
I liked the shortness, maybe a couple more lines could inhance the value but otherwise i liked it.
xox
by the way i liked ur quotes as well
Emma Wallis ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-05
Short and sweet with lots of emotions. Could be abit longer to portray the meaning behind it. 5/5, Em x
Emma Wallis ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-05
Short and sweet with lots of emotions. Could be abit longer to portray the meaning behind it. 5/5, Em x
John Peterson ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-29
Short sweet and to the point.. I can so relate..
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