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Goth marionette ( F P C D ) at 2008-10-31

Nice one sweetie ..U wrote it as a story..I liked it;)

tigerdan ( F C ) at 2008-11-08

Every time I saw him it took my breathe away.

change it to breath

Breathe is what you are doing
Breath is what you are taking

Get it? :)

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