Lawliet ( F P C D )
at 2009-02-06
Well i like your unique portrayal of loneliness. Thought you didn't state that you are lonely but the whole poem conveys thats. Well seeing couples hugging and kissing makes you feel that you want to be loved by someone too; having someone showing concern and affections for you.But then again be careful to not fall for mr wrong as it can break ur heart and shattered it into a million pieces. Well im sure the day will come for someone who will love u as much as you love him. Great write keep it up
Excellent Job
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