Comments

Angela Buena at 2004-12-25

Omg... that's so beautiful. No words can explain how it moved.

hannah (rondette) at 2005-01-01

awesome..good job!

tara at 2005-01-18

i like ur poem alot i felt da same way its real good

Stephanie at 2005-04-28

that was pretty good

Lesbian ( F C D ) at 2005-11-22

Thats a very very very awsome poem.
i dont know what to say,
i know i have the same feeling for my girlfriend

Could you please cheak out my poems
it would mean alot

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOX

MaDeERa at 2005-11-24

Dats beautaful girl!

shay at 2006-01-11

I really like this poem it reminds me about me and my boyfriend! i really enjoyed it!

Ashley ( F C ) at 2006-04-22

That was good. I really liked it.

Caity ( P C ) at 2006-05-25

This is a really good poem.....it flows very nicely 2gether but in the end it has a strong message 5/5 keep writin cuz u rock

xo

caity

dancer_chick ( F ) at 2006-06-23

Wow! that was so good. like a breath of fresh air. finally some one who feels good about things, and knows exactly how to express it. keep writing from your heart!
~casey~

x0x- aLiBaBy -x0x ( F P C ) at 2006-10-13

OMg! that was incredible!! i can totally tell its from the heart!!
keep it up~ aLi

heather at 2006-11-30

This is a REALLY good poem i like it ALOT:]

Deborah at 2006-12-29

*sniffles* it's sooooo beautiful!!!!!!! :')

Failed Attempt ( P C ) at 2007-01-03

I really like the words used in the first para..how it is structured and phrased well done!
happy new year
luv kate

redwane at 2007-01-21

I think that you are speaking of me !! you think so too !! thanks!!
i'm jockin : it's very nice waht have you wrote

Juanita at 2007-03-04

This is a very powerful poem as well as it is beutiful. I cant say many words that can explain it but as i read this i had 1 person on my mind. You have done great on this one i could actually put myself in with the poem. Keep up the good work.
~Juanita~

jenae at 2007-04-08

Wow. all of your poems are amazing. i wish i can write like that. even better, i wish other people can write like that. you gave me goose bumps when i read that. i have never read a piece so amazing, so thoughful and so meaningful in my life. wonderful job.

Espoir*failed ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-07

This poem was beautiful beyond words. the fact you managed to express these emotions in the first place is amazing.
it was fluent and well penned. amazing job.

Sharlene at 2007-05-09

A loved it, it was beautiful

Katharina ( P ) at 2007-05-10

I really like this poem^-^It's very goodâ�¥

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