xToBeWithYoux ( F P C D )
at 2008-12-23
I think this is a great poem, it shows some very raw emotion in an excellent form. I'm not convinced about the eyes leaking - it's a good metaphor but it doesn't sound very poetic to me. Otherwise, it is grammatically excellent and you have some real talent :)
Keep writing,
Em :)
Emma Wallis ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-20
We've all felt like this. 5/5, Em
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