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Poetry Knight ( F P C ) at 2008-12-24

Awsome poem. I know the feeling of love, and it being ripped away right from under you. lol. It seem it is written as a letter to your parents. I like the style and the emotion, not completly strong but efective none the less. keep it up and I'll keep reading. Your friend from afar AJ

shelby ( C ) at 2008-12-24

Awww cute poem i can relate so it means something to me. i loved it... keep those poems coming :)

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