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ToWriteLoveAgain ( F P C D ) at 2008-12-28

First of all... Welcome to the club!
I'm Kristina.
Second of all...this was one of the sweetest poems i have read.
Thank you for sharing. It brings joy to me to finally read something on this site that is worth reading. You did an amazing job of portraying your emotions through this piece of work. I can feel your heart pouring out and the love is shining through. You really did an outstanding job. Keep up the great work.
I'm sure this lovely lady will really like this piece!

VicariousSchsim at 2008-12-29

Yeah, I DO like this "piece".
Love you, baby. Damn it, I love all of your poetry.

Vicarious at 2009-04-08

I LOVE YOU. God damn, baby. Your poetry makes me cry. T_T I read some of wonderland, and it made me almost cry. Then I read this, and yeah, i'm sobbing. xD I love you, my everything. I'm gonna cherish you forever.

Tom Swart ( F P C ) at 2009-04-21

A very nice mix of thoughts complex and simple too. Not too hard to read and not too hard to feel. a nice love poem man. keep up the good works.

Katlette ( D ) at 2009-05-12

Beautifully written:) I like the way you put your words together. It inspires me to keep up with my writting and try to get it to flow..

Vicarious at 2009-06-01

BOOBSSSSSS

Jessica Nicole wood ( F C ) at 2009-10-07

This is really great!
It has amazing flow, and i love it!

keep writing cause im putting you in my favorites!
cant wait to see what comes next!

-jess,.

Btw: If you wouldnt mind commenting some of my poems, it would be greatly appriciated!

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