firexflys ( F P C D )
at 2009-01-05
Its not fair!!! that’s sooo sweet it reminded me of the movie/book A Walk to Remember..
i love it.. i liked the humor in it too.. keep up the great work..5.5
safi
at 2009-01-05
Very very good
MEGZ is wondering what to do abo ( P C D )
at 2009-01-05
Great poem just check the flow it starts off great then gets a little jumpy but keep it up.
~Amanda~ ( F C )
at 2009-01-05
This poem almost made me cry,
and i know it was not a lie.
I am sorry for all your lost,
ill help no matter the cost.
Lemon Square Bear23 ( F P C )
at 2009-01-09
Aww thats a very good poem your getting back to your heart felt writting agian keep it up! 5/5 always
Kate
Cara ( F P C D )
at 2009-01-22
Awww wow, how heartbreaking, but totally adorable at the same time. I think that you built up to the end really well and you captured me in.. its like i needed to find out how it ended.
For a guys whose a fool
^
i would say, For a guy whose a fool.
:]
5/5
ToRn iiN2 PeIcEs ( F C )
at 2009-01-27
Wow!! I can really relate to this
it was so romantic.
and sad.
5/5
XxFiighT In Th3 SnoWxX ( F D )
at 2009-02-13
Awwww that's so cute but also depressing :'(
but your a really good poet
5/5
Jenna Rose Kat ( F P C )
at 2009-02-14
Very nice, the sickness part was a twist but it fit nicely. Good job! 5/5
Marissa Anne
at 2009-02-27
Wow im so srry for your pain...but might i say your poetry is awesome it has a great ending in this poem i mean just the ending lines made me cry and "AWWWE" at the same time keep it up
Marissa<3
5/5
NOTHING MATTERS ANYMORE ( P )
at 2009-03-26
OMG!THAT'S NOT FAIR!THAT WAS SO SAD AND NICE AT THE SAME TIME!YOU'RE A WONDERFUL POET!GBY!I LUVED IT!SO SAD AND NICE!=]
Vanessa ( C )
at 2009-03-26
This is a good one. I really enjoyed reading it. It was like being with you.
can it all be true is this reall ( F C D )
at 2009-04-14
Awww i am cryin a river ova here i loved it
it was awsome and sweet and sad at the same time well hope to see more
tata loves
katie
IfAndOnlyIf
at 2009-06-21
Omg that made mee cry!!
thats an amzing poem!
Angel Tears ( F C )
at 2009-08-28
Wow, this poem was absolutely beautiful. It had me smiling from the beginning, then at the end it had me crying. Amazing piece, 5/5
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