Comments

AnCi ( F P C D ) at 2009-04-04

Amazing content of the poem! I really liked it =)

Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2009-04-09

This is what I call a hard hitting poem that needs to be read

well done

Mysterious Charmer ( F C ) at 2009-04-11

Wow just wow! This poem hit me deep down in my soul truly. This poem reminds me of where I grew up and the place I called home. I've seen so many end up on this road in life, a few were people I knew and called friend. From the title to the words that followed it felt like these words were being spoken to me. Brilliant work! You have a mighty pen, I shall definitely read more of your work.

Take care,
Mysterious Charmer

Avii ( F C D ) at 2009-04-14

Yehh' this is really deep... it's very good the way you put it.. this isn't the life to live tho.. && im sorry if this happened


Aveena-*

ShortyLiz89 ( F P C D ) at 2009-04-14

Nice poem.... is this a story of someone you really know? Keep up the good work and I hope to read more of your poems


Liz

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