Dark Secrets ( F C D )
at 2009-01-21
Wow! that just knocked me out of my chair!
Your words are wonderful and your poem flows perfectly, mostly I can easily relate to this feeling and I know how it feels to stuggle inside with a secret like that.
This lines spoke it all:
"Those secret looks and the touch of our eyes
It is admiration in a clever disguise
Or maybe I just got carried away
Because you'll never fall in love with me anyway"
billy rob ( F P C D )
at 2009-01-28
"But it seems you'll never show.
What I think my heart should know.
But your looks and peeks are there
And I swear they show you care"
How do you pick a stanza from a poem like this. My goodness, you write of two people dancing the silent dance, afraid to show the other they care. Ahh, but the truth is shown in ways words could not convey, anyway. Those peeks and looks..one catching the other gazing...making one turn away quickly. Alas, my friend, such is the way of life, sometimes. Occasionally, two souls collide and cannot find their grasp. Your write was superb. Well done, indeed. Billy Rob
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