Spirit ( F P C D )
at 2009-01-18
It's really good, but I wish that is was slightly longer. it was as is it just ended and there was no real truning point for the singer. I don't know what the rythen is so I made up my own while singing, hope that's ok. Not bad for a song.
thank you for the read
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