Noboys Hero ( F C D )
at 2009-01-22
Great job its sad yet your words to describe her are beautiful =] The thought that somebody can be your rival and yet a love at the same time can sometimes blind oblivious people. When you notice theres something special it's sometimes hard to hold onto. Youv'e penned a really good poem here so again great job 5/5
PoisonedXbyXhim ( F P C )
at 2009-06-20
This is so cute....I love the flow...5/5.
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