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oX BlueberryMuffinz Xo ( F P C D ) at 2009-02-11

Wow..this was sad.. I liked it alot though. Youre excellent at pouring your emotions into your poetry which is an amazing talent i think. Keep writing! 5/5 xx

Cierra ( P C ) at 2009-02-11

This was a great poem and i understand where your coming from, i went through something similar and i related to it. oh and great rhyme scheme

thanks for the comments

~Cierra Brent~

LavaGirl ( F P C D ) at 2009-03-28

I loved this poem a lot because you captured a lot of emotion and I knew what you were feeling at the time. 10/10
Excellent

xoxoxoxo
LavaGirl

Nikki Stoner ( F P C ) at 2009-07-26

Once again, amazing job. Beautiful flow. 5/5

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